We pitched our thriller idea to the media team, this is the powerpoint that we showed them-

We gained some positive and negative feed back.
One of the main points which we realised that we had to change was the fact we would be relying on the acting too much and need to concentrate more on the camera movement. Another would be the fact that the film could possibly end up turning into a drama, seeing how the mother copes with her son being mentally ill, therefore we would need to focus more on the son and only briefly see her and maybe don't use the point of view shot. We thought that to draw the attention towards the son more we would have a voice over leading up to the killing creating a different story line.